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Feb 1, 2007 6:00:38 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 1, 2007 6:00:38 GMT -5
This is one of the poems I had to write for a wedding, they liked it, made them cry. What do you think? It is a bit cheesy actually lol after reading it after all this time lol...
I have found my angel, I've found love, you're with me in my dreams, and my dreams have come true. I feel you in my heart, I feel you in my mind, and in my thoughts. You're the voice inside my head, and the song in my heart. We will share special moments, we will have memories, that will last us a life-time. Two hearts are joined together, in a love that will last forever. Whenever we're apart, we'll never have to say goodbye, as you're always going to be a part of me, especially in my heart. You're the one I'll come to, and you'll always have me. I have found my angel, I've found love.
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Feb 1, 2007 6:07:18 GMT -5
Post by cam on Feb 1, 2007 6:07:18 GMT -5
That is great jay.So romantic. I bet it did make a lot of people cry especially the bride.
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Feb 1, 2007 6:10:06 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 1, 2007 6:10:06 GMT -5
Thanks. Yeah it did, it made her mum cry, who I had to post it to, she read it to Nicola on the phone, it made her cry and she said even the groom had a tear in his eye!! I must be good! I will post one of my depressing ones later.
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Feb 1, 2007 6:30:04 GMT -5
Post by cam on Feb 1, 2007 6:30:04 GMT -5
You are good.
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Feb 1, 2007 6:36:43 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 1, 2007 6:36:43 GMT -5
Thank you
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Feb 1, 2007 8:47:37 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 1, 2007 8:47:37 GMT -5
A life so easily taken, A promise so easily broken, A gift so easily stolen. The memories are fading away, The lies, drowning, The fear, the sorrow, The pain we suffer, From the loss of our dear beloved. We couldn't save you, We couldn't hold you, We couldn't see your eyes, We could no longer feel your grace. You were to good for this world, You weren't given a chance. When your life was taken, Mine was taken too. When your heart stopped beating, My heart skipped a beat, replaced with the painful stab of death, When you died, I died with you. When all your pains came to end, Our pains began, When you fell to soft sleep, My nightmares came true. My world, so easily destroyed, My life, so easily betrayed. Words so easily spoken, "She will be ok" Words so easily broken. (R.I.P)
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Feb 1, 2007 17:15:02 GMT -5
Post by cam on Feb 1, 2007 17:15:02 GMT -5
OH ..... That is so good.
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Feb 1, 2007 17:20:51 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 1, 2007 17:20:51 GMT -5
Do you think so? I wrote it in memory of my cousin, a few days after.
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Feb 1, 2007 17:35:27 GMT -5
Post by cam on Feb 1, 2007 17:35:27 GMT -5
Yes I do.
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Feb 1, 2007 17:37:35 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 1, 2007 17:37:35 GMT -5
I wasn't sure myself... thank you
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Feb 12, 2007 7:00:25 GMT -5
Post by pixi on Feb 12, 2007 7:00:25 GMT -5
I've just moved these to over to the creative section
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Feb 12, 2007 9:22:57 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 12, 2007 9:22:57 GMT -5
Thanks
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Feb 12, 2007 18:17:09 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 12, 2007 18:17:09 GMT -5
jay your poems mean something you have a rare talent
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Feb 12, 2007 18:20:18 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 12, 2007 18:20:18 GMT -5
Thanks Tim that makes two of us then.
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Feb 12, 2007 18:23:01 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 12, 2007 18:23:01 GMT -5
yeh, dont worry jay i do pop in from time to time, but college is hard hence why i cant comment
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Feb 12, 2007 18:24:45 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 12, 2007 18:24:45 GMT -5
Thanks Tim, I appreciate it. I read yours too, very good indeed.
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Feb 12, 2007 18:29:23 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 12, 2007 18:29:23 GMT -5
thanks
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