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Song
Feb 13, 2007 12:30:23 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 13, 2007 12:30:23 GMT -5
Verse 1
Have you ever felt alone? Lost inside a life you hate, You feel like you can’t go on, While everyone else gets along, Do you always feel so left out? Like no one really gives a damn.
Verse 2
When you tell someone you love them, Did they throw it back in your face? Can you put up with all the lies, The faking smiles and stupid games. When you feel you really like the girl, You go for it and let them know, And all they do is leave you down, Let you carry on bleeding inside, You feel angry and let down, They don’t care the same.
Verse 3
Do you always lose the ones you love? Your family and your friends, A life so stolen so easily, And it hurts beyond repair, You wish you could bring them back, Nothings ever going to be the same again.
Verse 4
Do you always have to walk away? To save yourself, See what the past has done, Its over now, I’m alone. Just carry on walking away, I don't need you, or anyone. Lets save your time.
Verse 5
My life's a bitch.
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Song
Feb 13, 2007 17:58:02 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 13, 2007 17:58:02 GMT -5
Sung by me, emo style. With eletric guitars; bass and drums.
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Song
Feb 13, 2007 18:00:06 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 13, 2007 18:00:06 GMT -5
sounds good but a song cant be a song without a chorus
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Song
Feb 13, 2007 18:03:19 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 13, 2007 18:03:19 GMT -5
Yes it can and it is.
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Song
Feb 13, 2007 18:09:59 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 13, 2007 18:09:59 GMT -5
what is the song called
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Song
Feb 13, 2007 18:10:55 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 13, 2007 18:10:55 GMT -5
My Life's a Bitch.
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Song
Feb 13, 2007 18:10:57 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 13, 2007 18:10:57 GMT -5
It means more if theres a chorus, people dont just write verses, without a chorus
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Song
Feb 13, 2007 18:14:30 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 13, 2007 18:14:30 GMT -5
It means no less or no more either with or without a chorus. I have been writing songs all my life and yes people do write songs without a chorus, its no that common, but they do. And you can diss my work as much as you like, I like it. End of.
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Song
Feb 13, 2007 18:16:12 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 13, 2007 18:16:12 GMT -5
Im not dissing it, just trying to help you you work is top notch
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Song
Feb 13, 2007 18:18:59 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 13, 2007 18:18:59 GMT -5
I need feedback and constructive criticism not advice, I don't need help. More than 20 years experience and two publishers lined up I think I'm ok.
And just to back up my argument, I miss you by Simple Plan has no chorus.
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Song
Feb 13, 2007 18:22:51 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 13, 2007 18:22:51 GMT -5
I only trying to help, yes constructive criticism is ok, but advice, is handy as well
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Song
Feb 13, 2007 18:24:56 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 13, 2007 18:24:56 GMT -5
But the thing is, I don't need advice.
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Song
Feb 13, 2007 18:29:10 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 13, 2007 18:29:10 GMT -5
ok
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 15:30:07 GMT -5
Post by cam on Feb 14, 2007 15:30:07 GMT -5
That was a bit harsh jay.
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 16:02:54 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 14, 2007 16:02:54 GMT -5
yeh i was only trying to help
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 16:17:47 GMT -5
Post by cam on Feb 14, 2007 16:17:47 GMT -5
I did like the song though.
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 16:20:30 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 14, 2007 16:20:30 GMT -5
I did aint heard emo lol
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 16:24:28 GMT -5
Post by cam on Feb 14, 2007 16:24:28 GMT -5
I dont know who emo are. I like the lyrics.
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 16:28:44 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 14, 2007 16:28:44 GMT -5
it sounds like revenge
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 16:35:35 GMT -5
Post by cam on Feb 14, 2007 16:35:35 GMT -5
The lyrics?
I thought they represented pain.
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 16:53:44 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 14, 2007 16:53:44 GMT -5
be nice to know a meaning
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 16:56:24 GMT -5
Post by cam on Feb 14, 2007 16:56:24 GMT -5
For me it meant the pain of losing someone.
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 16:59:35 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 14, 2007 16:59:35 GMT -5
it means emotional
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 17:03:18 GMT -5
Post by cam on Feb 14, 2007 17:03:18 GMT -5
Your are right there,its very emotional.
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 17:17:11 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 14, 2007 17:17:11 GMT -5
i aint heard music of it tho
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 17:21:29 GMT -5
Post by cam on Feb 14, 2007 17:21:29 GMT -5
Maybe jay can put it on here for us.?
Any chance jay.?
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Song
Feb 14, 2007 17:30:12 GMT -5
Post by booglebogginswhoa on Feb 14, 2007 17:30:12 GMT -5
could be good
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Song
Feb 15, 2007 18:40:50 GMT -5
Post by hiddenscars on Feb 15, 2007 18:40:50 GMT -5
It was not harsh, it was the truth, I do not like to be patronised and be told how to write songs lol. No offence. I don't need much help in that way. But I appreciate all your concerns for my song writing skills.
And it is about being effed around for so long in life by everyone you like/love and the pain it can cause.
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